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First off this is really good!
The screamer in the drop is spot on.
The growls are on par.
and the break afterwards is pulled off nicely.
You could have easily gone straight into a bridge, done another buildup, and added a second drop (basically just a copy of the first drop, but broken down a little, and changed up) and then you'd have a nice 3:00-3:30 song, instead of a 1:30 short.
Overall, well done, the mixing/mastering is done nicely.
5/5 - 10/10.
{Official Review Request Club}

Spline-1337 responds:

Thanks for your feedback! Be sure to take into account your wishes in the following tracks.

:'(
Broken hearts are the worst.
I love this, 10/10 for sure.
I like how it's not a real fast BPM. :)
excellent work :)

KrinnValKhristi responds:

Broken hearts are the worst yes, and I guess time is the only cure.


Sometimes....

yer clippin a little.
might wanna sidechain, or manage volumes a little.
Love the cheerful, uplifting atmosphere here :DD
I'm totally in love with that snare šŸ˜šŸ¤©
Great job!!

XenoXenon responds:

thx

The beat in the first drop really doesn't do the rest of the song justice, imo.
That being said, I think the song was overall well produced, and nice job to both of you! :)
I would have used a different snare, but that's just me.
I really like the atmosphere here, and I look forward to hearing more!
Also, I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner, life has been waaayy busy.
At any rate, a solid production, and I think it's great! :D

X3LL3N responds:

Thanks for your review, atually pretty much everything good in this track is by Aerin lmao

Raiders Of The Lost Arc ^^
Wow brings back old memories.
A+ job to all who participated! šŸ˜€šŸ¤©šŸ˜

JessieYun responds:

Hey MRM3,
Thank you very much for the comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it, bringing back your memories!

Wonderful. o:
The only thing I might have is maybe you don't want as much attention drawn to the risers (especially that one at 0:44) , I believe that they add far more if they are in the background, instead of the frontlines, hitting hard, if that makes sense.
Besides that *minor detail*, I really like it, like alotttt! That trumpet/trombone is stunning, and they way you bring it all together is wow.
Overall wonderful track! 😁

JessieYun responds:

Hey MRM3,
Thanks a lot for the comment and a suggestion. I’m glad you enjoyed it!

You may have overdone the vocal samples imo...
But it was well done 😁
Enjoyed listening, and props to you for making this genre... it's not real easy to make tbh.
:DD

FelixZophar responds:

Yep you're right.

XDDDD
I know where you took those vocals from >,<
It's one of meh fav short movies šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ¤Ŗ
I'm happy with how you used them!!!
is that a triangle that you used???
if so, it's sooooo high end it hurts meh ears :c
other than that, wonderfuLL!!!! :DDD

RickyCroci responds:

Thanks, i think this is one of my best song. I don't understand what triangle you mean. Maybe the snares.

You've got some nice harmonies.
The overall cheerful sound is nice.
Now for criticisms.
Drums are too loud. Especially the crashes.
Some instruments really don't belong together, and I think you used some of those, whether it was just the harmonies, or the instruments themselves, there is clash.
Overall, mixing and mastering is a low spot for this song, however those are things learned as time progresses :)
Not bad for a newer song producer (assuming you are one)

:o
This is the epitome of Cinematic.
Epicness.
I hope to one day be able to compete with this, however I feel you've already have left the competition in the dust.
New fav :o
I literally can't say anything bad about this track.
10/10 for sureeee!

JessieYun responds:

Hi MRM3,
Thank you so much for the comment! I’m very glad you enjoyed it!

Just a kid who's in love with music and production. Currently studying Audio Engineering.

Age 22

Conservatory of Recording Arts

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