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It is nice to see someone else who uses LMMS!
Great job!
There is so much potential for that Organic, haha.

I feel that I'm being overwhelmed, too much is going on, the lead is nice, but I think there's too much release on that string instrument you used.
Other than that, If you cleaned this up a bit, I see potential!
Great attempt at FB!

X3LL3N responds:

Thanks c:

Great job!
I like the melody, and the overall flow is nice.
At the "drop" it does clip pretty badly, I know you're aware of this, however you did say to give feedback.
Maybe if you kind hipass swept out and in, right before the drop, that would give the drop a lot more power, limited/sidechained on that drop, this could be really great!
Of course, I don't know how Nexus/Spire works, so, I can't give any DAW advice.
Looking forward to this!
C:

X3LL3N responds:

If you knew how distorted it was before xD
I used Limiters, Peak Controllers, EQs and automations, still distorted lmao
As for the sidechain, it's a simple but pretty nice idea, thanks !

This be clippin' so much!
run this through a limiter/sidechainer and I'd love to hear it at it's best.
It's not bad, besides the clipping, though.

Lot7even responds:

Really? xD
I didn't listen to it at full volume at all. I had broken headphones.

The hats might be a tad too much... Also it clips a bit at some parts, you might want to run it through a limiter, or consider sidechaining some of the instruments.
Other than that, love it!
I might put this under Video Game, rather than DnB, but that's just my opinion.
10/10, would listen again!
:)

technomantics responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I don't think he will go back to any of these as they are a capture in time for his creative period.

this is really professional!
keep up the great work, Zophar!!

FelixZophar responds:

Thanks!

This isn't bad at all!
except for that ending... man why'd you have to go and ruin this track like that?

208HHCae responds:

Idk why i ruined the end lol.
thanks for not hating it lol

This could use some mastering... for sure...
But I could see this being great, with a little more mixing/mastering!

I think this is by far your best!
This is actually reeeeealllyyyyyy good!!!!
Why didn't you tell me you were such a good creator? xd
Could I remix this?

Gougou responds:

Thank you so mush :D
And for the remix yes :)

That detuned bass is kinda a bummer.
Other than that, love it!

vidu3k333 responds:

the detune was intentional bc i was experimenting a little :p thanks

Totally back and kickin' ass

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