If you leave again, it will make me sad :'c
If you leave again, it will make me sad :'c
2019 here, i left ;< sorry bru. Living without internet is just too good. But its still nice to sometimes check via family's computers, once a year or so.. on the peeps ive reached via NG. :)
Don't leave again, plzzzzz!
;3
Nice job!
I love it!
Though I wouldn't put it in Cinematic, more ambient or classical.
5* tho :D
Criticisms...
Too long to not have a bridge, or break from the main chorus, or melody, or whatever you call the part after the drop.
The snare was too loud in the beginning.
The rise at 1:03 the saw wave you used was too detuned, and clashed with everything else.
Right after the drop(s), it clips for a few seconds.
Commendations...
I love it when the melody comes in at 0:15.
0:30 was a +1 moment for me also.
I think that you did not fail the Big Room this time, as it was executed well.
I like the period (transition?) between the rise and the drop, it's just like all the "pro" edm songs. :P
Overall....
I liked it, but there are several small things that can be improved.
:)
-MRM3
Yeah. I've not been doing good lately. I'm having a very hard time writing songs. :(
I like it, but the fact is, that the melody is waaaaaay too fast for this song.
Also, this is not house, this is probably closer to ambient.
the hits at 1:01 - 1:20 are too loud, and they clip.
aside from that, nice job :)
I didn't think much for the tags, you can see I put tropical too but it isn't x)
Also yeah, I kinda rushed after 0:50.
Thanks for the feedback :D
I have no problem rating this 5*!
Definitely your best....... by far!
Great job!
-MRM3
Thank you so much :D
hrm, not bad FX.
:)
Thanks :)
5*, but it's distorted, and clips alot. :/
Definitely a fav, forsure!
Those builds.... were the only part I didn't like.
I liked the other 95%. :D
I don't know, this is pretty good man!
Note: The melody is waay recognizable, so, you'll be just fine, I wouldn't DQ you, and I'm sure Zophar wouldn't either!
Good job!
-MRM3
Hey MRM3 thanks for listening and feedback, I'm glad that you 95% like it :D maybe next one will be 100 ;)
I really like this.
I think the kick at the beginning was too dry. (My entry was accused of the same, so, you're not alone haha).
Aside from that, I really like the song!
The bass fits in well, the guitar is excellent, and you killed it with the vocals!
Nice job!
Yeah, you are right! I actually think the whole song could use more "dampening" jaja but I am working on a whole album right now so I did what I could in one day :). I'll give it a full remastering when I get time though. Thanks!
Just a kid who's in love with music and production. Currently studying Audio Engineering.
Age 22
Conservatory of Recording Arts
Planet Earth
Joined on 2/11/18