Criticisms...
Too long to not have a bridge, or break from the main chorus, or melody, or whatever you call the part after the drop.
The snare was too loud in the beginning.
The rise at 1:03 the saw wave you used was too detuned, and clashed with everything else.
Right after the drop(s), it clips for a few seconds.
Commendations...
I love it when the melody comes in at 0:15.
0:30 was a +1 moment for me also.
I think that you did not fail the Big Room this time, as it was executed well.
I like the period (transition?) between the rise and the drop, it's just like all the "pro" edm songs. :P
Overall....
I liked it, but there are several small things that can be improved.
:)
-MRM3