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Constructive Criticism:
The high note hits in the beginning were too high, maybe you could lower them an octave.
This isn't "Dubstep" in my opinion, it is D&B.
You got 4 stars from me, because this is just simply isn't dubstep. if you would have rated it as D&B, it would have gotten 5/5 easy :) ( I actually rated you 5* )
As Varsity mentioned, a riser would fill the awkward gap you have in there right now.
Even if you don't have any "risers" downloaded, you can be creative, and make your own: A lot of attack + release, and slowly *and exponentially* increasing the pitch of the instrument makes a nice riser (with a little practice).
I have found that you can make dubstep without purchasing anything, you just have to be creative, and be willing to put work into it.
To make "wubs" you just have to use a bass, and change the pitch quickly. voila. with a little practice, (and in the correct atmosphere) this can sound amazing!
Overall, this is an amazing piece, which could be taken to another level, with just a few minor changes!
:)

SpeTheof responds:

The mix is so poor u can't hear the wobbles HAHA, anyway I fixed those things u mentioned, thanks! A riser can easily be made using 3xOsc (U select the NOISE shape and then automate cutoff/res accordingly)

Thanks for the tips bro!

The harmony is actually pretty good on this one!
But, there is only around 1 minute of "song" here, and a lot of transitions/buildups: the fact that the intro lasted almost 3 minutes and 10 seconds....
overall, good job :)

The bass and higher end sounds don't go together for a great portion of the song.
other than that, Nice Job!

There are certain songs that no other song will ever trump....
I think this song just trumped all those songs :O
This is absolutely amazing!
The only thing I think could be improved slightly, is when the bass parts are so.... choppy. maybe you could "connect the dots" just a little bit, then it would be perfect.
It's pretty close to perfect right now. It's probably 9 out of 5 stars worthy ^,^
Amazing job, and keep up the great work!
~MRM3~

Great for what it is!
I hope that you can use LMMS to it's full potential!
I have used LMMS for around 4 months now. and once you figure all there is to figure out out, it is a great program!

FelixZophar responds:

Yeah, but I have ONE problem. The pitch is shifted +3 semitones for some reason. I don't know why. Oh yeah by the way, I like your new logo. How did you make it? (PM Me!)

Could I build on this?(Remix it)

Gougou responds:

Ok :)

Wow, this is probably your best!
I actually really like this one :)
You don't have much if any clash here, the instruments go well together :)

Gougou responds:

Thanks :D

it's 5 stars, for what it is...

Gougou responds:

Ok :)

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