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[Felix Zophar - Prisoner]

Criticisms...
Too long to not have a bridge, or break from the main chorus, or melody, or whatever you call the part after the drop.
The snare was too loud in the beginning.
The rise at 1:03 the saw wave you used was too detuned, and clashed with everything else.
Right after the drop(s), it clips for a few seconds.

Commendations...
I love it when the melody comes in at 0:15.
0:30 was a +1 moment for me also.
I think that you did not fail the Big Room this time, as it was executed well.
I like the period (transition?) between the rise and the drop, it's just like all the "pro" edm songs. :P

Overall....
I liked it, but there are several small things that can be improved.
:)
-MRM3

FelixZophar responds:

Yeah. I've not been doing good lately. I'm having a very hard time writing songs. :(

[X3ll3n - Believe (NGRMC 2018)]

I like it, but the fact is, that the melody is waaaaaay too fast for this song.
Also, this is not house, this is probably closer to ambient.
the hits at 1:01 - 1:20 are too loud, and they clip.
aside from that, nice job :)

X3LL3N responds:

I didn't think much for the tags, you can see I put tropical too but it isn't x)
Also yeah, I kinda rushed after 0:50.
Thanks for the feedback :D

[Crystal cave]

I have no problem rating this 5*!
Definitely your best....... by far!
Great job!
-MRM3

Gougou responds:

Thank you so much :D

[Noises]

hrm, not bad FX.
:)

Gougou responds:

Thanks :)

[To the Rythm(NGRMC 2018)]

Those builds.... were the only part I didn't like.
I liked the other 95%. :D
I don't know, this is pretty good man!
Note: The melody is waay recognizable, so, you'll be just fine, I wouldn't DQ you, and I'm sure Zophar wouldn't either!
Good job!
-MRM3

TenodiBoris responds:

Hey MRM3 thanks for listening and feedback, I'm glad that you 95% like it :D maybe next one will be 100 ;)

[Make it Hard (NGRMC Remix)]

I really like this.
I think the kick at the beginning was too dry. (My entry was accused of the same, so, you're not alone haha).
Aside from that, I really like the song!
The bass fits in well, the guitar is excellent, and you killed it with the vocals!
Nice job!

TheMoebiusProject responds:

Yeah, you are right! I actually think the whole song could use more "dampening" jaja but I am working on a whole album right now so I did what I could in one day :). I'll give it a full remastering when I get time though. Thanks!

[Felix Zophar - The Top of the Night (ft. MrFistSalad)]

Just 5 stars.
No criticism, no extremely high points.
Just 5 stars. xD
Nice job! :)

FelixZophar responds:

Thanks!

[Kronomikal - Let's Get?]

Okay, I know you don't just want a 2star review from somebody without an explanation.
Here we go...

00:00 - 00:26:
I like it, but there is way to much reverb/sustain on all of the instruments. It is also lacking in low end, and has way too much mid, which combining the mid-heavy chords, and the sustain/rev, distorts easily. But I do like the melody.

00:27 - 00:40:
Transition took too long, and I can hear that it was probably made with a default preset.
Maybe cut that down to 3-5 seconds, instead of 13, because it is too long.

00:40 - 00:41:
I love that drumroll.

00:41 - 01:23:
This is just white noise, with the cutoff frequency rapidly automated. I This is terrible.
Then there's that 1 high note that you play over and over again.
If you would have done a little, just a little of this, mixed in with other instruments, sort of like instead of using growls you use the white noise, with the freq. automated.

01:24 - 02:12:
Again, I like the melody, however, the piano type instrument you're using has way way too much reverb/sustain, and so, that gets distorted easily, as it's all mid-range frequencies.

02:13 - 02:40:
Again, the white noise. This differed none whatsoever from the first time, and was just as bad.
It really could have used a little bit of changing, as it is practically a direct copy.

02:40 - 02:56:
Out of key, and not matching the rest of the song.

There were parts I really liked about it, and then there were parts that totally ruined the experience for me.
Work on your mastering, and mixing.
This could easily be a 5 star track with some of both!

KronomikalMusic responds:

this was made way long ago lol and when i listen to it it feels like im listening to a substance of horse pee

[DirtyPaws - It's Me (EspriTox Remix)]

Lovely dubstep!
I'll be listening to this for a while.
;3
No criticism from me this time! Nothing to criticize. :3

catapillie responds:

haha thanks :3

[Felix Zophar - Egyptian Cat]

Good job!
Not much to say, either positive or negative.
:P

FelixZophar responds:

Heh.