I like it, but the fact is, that the melody is waaaaaay too fast for this song.
Also, this is not house, this is probably closer to ambient.
the hits at 1:01 - 1:20 are too loud, and they clip.
aside from that, nice job :)
I like it, but the fact is, that the melody is waaaaaay too fast for this song.
Also, this is not house, this is probably closer to ambient.
the hits at 1:01 - 1:20 are too loud, and they clip.
aside from that, nice job :)
I didn't think much for the tags, you can see I put tropical too but it isn't x)
Also yeah, I kinda rushed after 0:50.
Thanks for the feedback :D
I have no problem rating this 5*!
Definitely your best....... by far!
Great job!
-MRM3
Thank you so much :D
hrm, not bad FX.
:)
Thanks :)
Those builds.... were the only part I didn't like.
I liked the other 95%. :D
I don't know, this is pretty good man!
Note: The melody is waay recognizable, so, you'll be just fine, I wouldn't DQ you, and I'm sure Zophar wouldn't either!
Good job!
-MRM3
Hey MRM3 thanks for listening and feedback, I'm glad that you 95% like it :D maybe next one will be 100 ;)
I really like this.
I think the kick at the beginning was too dry. (My entry was accused of the same, so, you're not alone haha).
Aside from that, I really like the song!
The bass fits in well, the guitar is excellent, and you killed it with the vocals!
Nice job!
Yeah, you are right! I actually think the whole song could use more "dampening" jaja but I am working on a whole album right now so I did what I could in one day :). I'll give it a full remastering when I get time though. Thanks!
Just 5 stars.
No criticism, no extremely high points.
Just 5 stars. xD
Nice job! :)
Thanks!
Okay, I know you don't just want a 2star review from somebody without an explanation.
Here we go...
00:00 - 00:26:
I like it, but there is way to much reverb/sustain on all of the instruments. It is also lacking in low end, and has way too much mid, which combining the mid-heavy chords, and the sustain/rev, distorts easily. But I do like the melody.
00:27 - 00:40:
Transition took too long, and I can hear that it was probably made with a default preset.
Maybe cut that down to 3-5 seconds, instead of 13, because it is too long.
00:40 - 00:41:
I love that drumroll.
00:41 - 01:23:
This is just white noise, with the cutoff frequency rapidly automated. I This is terrible.
Then there's that 1 high note that you play over and over again.
If you would have done a little, just a little of this, mixed in with other instruments, sort of like instead of using growls you use the white noise, with the freq. automated.
01:24 - 02:12:
Again, I like the melody, however, the piano type instrument you're using has way way too much reverb/sustain, and so, that gets distorted easily, as it's all mid-range frequencies.
02:13 - 02:40:
Again, the white noise. This differed none whatsoever from the first time, and was just as bad.
It really could have used a little bit of changing, as it is practically a direct copy.
02:40 - 02:56:
Out of key, and not matching the rest of the song.
There were parts I really liked about it, and then there were parts that totally ruined the experience for me.
Work on your mastering, and mixing.
This could easily be a 5 star track with some of both!
this was made way long ago lol and when i listen to it it feels like im listening to a substance of horse pee
Lovely dubstep!
I'll be listening to this for a while.
;3
No criticism from me this time! Nothing to criticize. :3
haha thanks :3
Good job!
Not much to say, either positive or negative.
:P
Heh.
No criticism :D
Yaaay !
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Conservatory of Recording Arts
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