5* if the vocals were half as loud as they are now.
I really think that this could be an amazing track, if only the vocals were quieter....
5* if the vocals were half as loud as they are now.
I really think that this could be an amazing track, if only the vocals were quieter....
Man, I'm so sorry about that. I'm still learning. And this one felt really loud- so the vocals came out really loud. Unfortunately, the original project is lost to history, so it can't be changed. But maybe one day we'll remake it.
Love this!
Sidechained well, and the drums are layered nicely!
Love the laxness if there is such a thing :)
Thanks! I'm trying FL and I really like it!
I have literally listened to this on repeat 1 for hours now.
This is amazing drumstep!!!!
5/5 for sure! Wonderful job, Eruption!
thank you!
Nicely sidechained.
No clashing.
Maybe the subkick could be a bit more quiet.
Love the lead. This has your sound to it, I could pick it out of a million.
5/5 for sure!
:)
Thanks for the feedback !
I agree with the subkick haha but I couldn't change it because I lost the feeling of the track I liked, for the next one, I'll pay attention to that right at the begining of the project ;)
Yes it's mine haha ;) Thanks sooo much !!
:D
I like this!
The piano had a few off-notes here and there, but 99% of it was spot on!
It is pretty slow for 160BPM, if you ask me.
:P
Overall, a few notes could be changed, but nothing even close to warranting a star deduction. :)
5/5, nice job!
Thanks for your review. I don't think there were off notes, maybe they didn't just sound well together, making unintended dissonances. Slow for 160 BPM... I get what you're saying. It could have been 80 BPM as easily, the truth is Purity 1 sounds even slower with a tempo of 200 BPM.
If you leave again, it will make me sad :'c
2019 here, i left ;< sorry bru. Living without internet is just too good. But its still nice to sometimes check via family's computers, once a year or so.. on the peeps ive reached via NG. :)
Criticisms...
Too long to not have a bridge, or break from the main chorus, or melody, or whatever you call the part after the drop.
The snare was too loud in the beginning.
The rise at 1:03 the saw wave you used was too detuned, and clashed with everything else.
Right after the drop(s), it clips for a few seconds.
Commendations...
I love it when the melody comes in at 0:15.
0:30 was a +1 moment for me also.
I think that you did not fail the Big Room this time, as it was executed well.
I like the period (transition?) between the rise and the drop, it's just like all the "pro" edm songs. :P
Overall....
I liked it, but there are several small things that can be improved.
:)
-MRM3
Yeah. I've not been doing good lately. I'm having a very hard time writing songs. :(
I like it, but the fact is, that the melody is waaaaaay too fast for this song.
Also, this is not house, this is probably closer to ambient.
the hits at 1:01 - 1:20 are too loud, and they clip.
aside from that, nice job :)
I didn't think much for the tags, you can see I put tropical too but it isn't x)
Also yeah, I kinda rushed after 0:50.
Thanks for the feedback :D
I have no problem rating this 5*!
Definitely your best....... by far!
Great job!
-MRM3
Thank you so much :D
hrm, not bad FX.
:)
Thanks :)
Just a kid who's in love with music and production. Currently studying Audio Engineering.
Age 22
Conservatory of Recording Arts
Planet Earth
Joined on 2/11/18