MRM3's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Melodic Dubstep (HELP PLZ)]

Constructive Criticism:
The high note hits in the beginning were too high, maybe you could lower them an octave.
This isn't "Dubstep" in my opinion, it is D&B.
You got 4 stars from me, because this is just simply isn't dubstep. if you would have rated it as D&B, it would have gotten 5/5 easy :) ( I actually rated you 5* )
As Varsity mentioned, a riser would fill the awkward gap you have in there right now.
Even if you don't have any "risers" downloaded, you can be creative, and make your own: A lot of attack + release, and slowly *and exponentially* increasing the pitch of the instrument makes a nice riser (with a little practice).
I have found that you can make dubstep without purchasing anything, you just have to be creative, and be willing to put work into it.
To make "wubs" you just have to use a bass, and change the pitch quickly. voila. with a little practice, (and in the correct atmosphere) this can sound amazing!
Overall, this is an amazing piece, which could be taken to another level, with just a few minor changes!
:)

SpeTheof responds:

The mix is so poor u can't hear the wobbles HAHA, anyway I fixed those things u mentioned, thanks! A riser can easily be made using 3xOsc (U select the NOISE shape and then automate cutoff/res accordingly)

Thanks for the tips bro!

[Felix Zophar - Sike]

Great for what it is!
I hope that you can use LMMS to it's full potential!
I have used LMMS for around 4 months now. and once you figure all there is to figure out out, it is a great program!

FelixZophar responds:

Yeah, but I have ONE problem. The pitch is shifted +3 semitones for some reason. I don't know why. Oh yeah by the way, I like your new logo. How did you make it? (PM Me!)

[Haunted sponges]

Could I build on this?(Remix it)

Gougou responds:

Ok :)

[Four]

Wow, this is probably your best!
I actually really like this one :)
You don't have much if any clash here, the instruments go well together :)

Gougou responds:

Thanks :D

[Heartbeat]

it's 5 stars, for what it is...

Gougou responds:

Ok :)

[Time]

I don't know.
I really don't know. LOL.

Gougou responds:

I think i should never put this song on newgrounds :(

[Melancholy!]

I'm liking quite a bit of this song, however, it is pretty inconsistent.
overall, could use some improvements, but, you're on the right track!

SaghaleyLewis responds:

thank you for the pointers! i really appreciate it.

[Barren Abyss (my first song)]

I can tell you used LMMS!
So do I!
This could handle some major... major improvements, but, there are some things which I like about this :)

Looking forward to seeing more from you!
Also, I'll Scout you, as a musician, and that will allow you to be on the charts. Your view counts will go waaay up, and all that. :)

SaghaleyLewis responds:

thank you so much! my more recent submissions are of much higher quality but thanks for the scout!